My gurL !!
when i see u with some one
i long to have u as my only one
when i get u as mine
all my worries fly by a line
and then we kiss lip to lip
my heart beat and gives a skip
i suck the water from ur mouth
pull you into my throat
no drop of water has ever been so pure
u r my love that is for sure
my heart now beats faster than ever
hands and legs start to shiver
u entered my blood hence to brain
oh sweet heart u eased all my pain
without u i never will be fine
promise me u will always be mine
Oh!! my Girl i am missing you so much... !!
2 comments:
umm .. u can do better than this.
i'd rate this poem 2 and a half stars.(out of 5)
awwww......
i dont knw abt the writing style or anything .... but i cud feel the emotions right thru.... thts wat makes it beautiful. :)
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